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Overburdened

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Well i do feel better after drawing this.... ^ w^"
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HP psc1300
Date Taken
Mar 12, 2013, 3:32:28 PM
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Rui-Eri's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

The word "Overburdened" in the title makes me believe of huge and heavy impacts on ones life and I can't say the light rain is the perfect example of that but it works due to depression thoughts. If the title were changed slightly, it would deliver a different message.

The details on the character are well done! I can see the wrinkles on the clothes. The anatomy of the body figure is almost flawless and her reaction captures the moment! Her bending down is impacted with emotion and the tears show how terrible she's feeling which is what the artist wanted!

A couple of things that kinda bother me are the two brown poles and the background effect. Since everything has some form of depth to it, the poles being flat confuses me. I would assume that the thing above her is some kind of roof since the character's hair is not getting wet but not everyone would get that at first. Maybe if more of the top was shown, it would make it clear.

You can barely see the back end being a wall with the shadow on top and behind the character. The background is almost so white, it could that she's out in the open somewhere.

Overall, great job but there are just some minor things that need work here :3